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68559, Tryna shake writers block.....
Posted by southernboy_423, Tue Jun-05-07 06:04 AM
its alot of dude hustling/
but that shits for nothing when/
all they tyrna do sell dope to get a set of rims/
a lil street credit pair of jays some new tims/
they living life backward a costum fitted brem/
no honor amongst thevies//
n'we all hoping to steal time/
priorities flipped we all needing money to feel fine/
i know kids need food and, bills need paid/
so why the every week hair doo, every 3 day fades/
youngens seeing juries cuz snatch cats jew-erlies/
another brother pull a peice, so now we reading eulogies/
videos sick-en-ing just a bunch of wanna-bees/
forget it u can have that, that aint what i wanna be/
i rather be a "B" than "D-boy" trapping/
just like i rather be a M-C than another dude rapping/

Peace & Hip-Hop
MusicIsLife

"my third eye like pink eye...seen and contagious" - Common Sense

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"my third eye like pink eye...seen and contagious" - Common Sense

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/jussleepmusic
68560, RE: Tryna shake writers block.....
Posted by txpost, Tue Jun-05-07 07:52 AM
eye like it
68566, nice...
Posted by willi_dudat, Tue Jun-05-07 10:47 AM
especially the closing line... its a whole lotta dem dudes just rappin and sayin nuthin so, i agree whole heartedly... looks like you shakin writer's block pretty well...

over and out
du
68574, You ( ( ( S H O O K ) ) ) It ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Jun-05-07 10:39 PM
*Writer's Block All Gone*

But U can't spell worth a damn boo! -- :P

Stick around and keep shakin' the shit outta that "Block" -- *smiles*


Luv'd the content & concept of this lil' nugget .... *yesssss*


68590, RE: You ( ( ( S H O O K ) ) ) It ...
Posted by southernboy_423, Wed Jun-06-07 04:02 AM
so photo....i'll stop typing so fast and proof read i promise.

thanks for reading....peace


"my third eye like pink eye...seen and contagious" - Common Sense

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/jussleepmusic
68579, i can help but only if you are really willing to get rid of it
Posted by Rajeniro757, Tue Jun-05-07 11:15 PM
come to d.c. 5th and H street
once you're there
stump on a blind womans feet
reform SWV and make them sing Weak
speak in third person
then go to church cursing
tell T-pain he ugly
it's a crime to be flirtin
certain ?cause you could turn back
or give all the Pistons a smack
throw a bottle at akon
steal kanye's backpack
tell canibus every album he does is wack
in fact stand under rhianna
and her umbrella
get me Mya's phone number
make bobby and whitney
have to stay together
Make love to Mo'nique
in 100 degree weather
wearing leather and Kufi's
holla at Hillary Clinton
then slip her ass a ruffi
kill george clooney
tired of ocean movies
teach dakota fanning
to roll snoop's doobies
if your writer's block
is still going ock
take two tylenols
and start over from the top
68591, RE: i can help but only if you are really willing to get rid of it
Posted by southernboy_423, Wed Jun-06-07 05:07 AM
good help homie, its felt homie/
lyrics are kept covered//
cronies// cant deliver like...
out of zone addresses to dominos/
now a days they wanting a hot bar/
they went from a trap star//
to partying like a rock star//
somebody tell'em it aint far/
dumb and dumber jim carey/
its scarey// cuz shit selling/
and its swelling heads, so they mr potatas'/
i aint blowing'em hot air/
i back hand'em like rick flair/
and red chest whack rappers/
dudes can spit my shit backwards
it'll still make sense//
i keep a pen and pad//
like a secretary on the rag/
i eat emcees like reeses/
most cant see me/
they should change the "explict content"/
to "as seen on tv"/
i hit hard im dead str8//
lyrics carry dead weight/
tylenol not all, my verses causing headaches/

"my third eye like pink eye...seen and contagious" - Common Sense

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/jussleepmusic
68592, Sir.
Posted by Rajeniro757, Wed Jun-06-07 06:21 AM
I declare that was just vicious
68600, RE: Sir.
Posted by southernboy_423, Wed Jun-06-07 12:31 PM
thanks homie, good look on the verse.

peace


"my third eye like pink eye...seen and contagious" - Common Sense

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/jussleepmusic
68604, that was dope mayne!
Posted by soulsupreme, Wed Jun-06-07 12:56 PM

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amy winehouse-back to black
james morrison-undiscovered
pharoahe monch-desire


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68627, effortless *daps*
Posted by blak_yukon, Thu Jun-07-07 03:12 PM

<--really!,have one--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

let's talk:
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68658, looks like some
Posted by BUNDY, Thu Jun-07-07 06:11 PM
real mc'ing goning on in heer