I don't think I like it! -- x(

Your verbage is tight -- On Point Lines and allladat -- *No Doubt*

Cuz U know, that U know, whatcha KNOW -- *Spiritually On Point*

But...

It didn't flow smooth to me -- and your grammar was kinda ... *hmmmmm* -- choppy / broken ... nahmean?


I'mmma fan of your work tho, and U know thisssssss maynnnnnn ... :D