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67795, Tonight .2 Posted by empro, Fri Apr-27-07 03:49 AM
I write to channel this anger I've known you all my life but still I'm living with a stranger I'm 2 minutes away from pickin up the banger Worried about bring a pretty girl home knowing that you would wanna 'bang her'
What would you do if your father dissowned you? Not for nothin...but for some new pussy from Becky, Jill, Eva, and Sue You would be pissed right? Ready to shoot a nigga dead on sight What is the answer for when you father speaks about an untreatable cancer placed on your motherjust so he can barrow some cash? Its been a long time coming and if one of us won't leave we're bound to clash You forced your kids to grow up fast and ask "Did dad forget about us?" Your poppa passed on when you were 14 but does that give you a reason to shit on us because you lust? I hate we have the same name All this bullshit I've been through...you're the one to blame My boys hold their heads up and look you in the eye when they speak about their fathers But my fix my eyes on the ground and hold my head down in shame A life of wealth and fame is what you hope to attain but you lack future sight and only focus on the short gain I've been hip to this game for quite some time and I already told you its okay to leave I'll be fine But you didn't You stayed And I said to everyone "I told you so" As a family we don't grow Its too many lies, secrets, and emotions we won't show With my own 2 eyes tell me how many bitches have smiled at me knowing their your hoes? I don't even really need to know the number I'm passed swearing I'm done caring But I hate the fact we're sharing some of the same manners This won't be another case of "Like father like son" Cuz son wants to be in heaven when its finally all said and done And life is getting harder for me Alone is what is best for me I've gotta find out the right road for me so hopefully I can live long Me and you have been done Now I turn it over to God and hope he makes me strong Big enough to face my peers along with my personal fears and things around me
Home isn't safe You escape 3 or 4 times a week thinking everythings o.k. I'm here with your wife Not too far out of reach is a loaded .9 mm and a knife Why? Because you owe lots of people Lots of dough Home isn't save that I'm sure you know So why leave me here to hold shit down I didn't say any vows so why should I put my life on the line for a nigga who said he has no kids? Whatever Fuck it
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67851, RE: Tonight .2 Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Apr-29-07 02:15 PM
This sounds like a "vent" with a storyline in tow ...
You've written several flows about "A Father" -- "A Disappointment" -- "A Legacy Left Alone" -- But I can't remember whether you said it was true to life ... or just a story -- *My Bad*
I'm inclined to believe there's some truth to this scenario, since you're so good at writing about this particular shit~u~ation -- (But if not, itz no problem) -- I enjoy reading -- never~the~less ... It invokes emotions of hurt, regrets, disappointment, anger, etc. -- AND THAT'S A GOOD THING! -- :D
*Respect*
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