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67781, the title is inviting
Posted by mindful, Thu Apr-26-07 07:09 PM
how'd you come up with it?

and these lines i felt... were the most potent to the piece:

planet on my shoulders in atlas position
everyday people feeling trapped in the system
diggin' in my pockets for my past wisdom
tripping on tomorrows, chasing past instants

time keeps on slipping as the record keeps skipping
people throwing stones, with hands stained from sinning
running short on options, rockin' to the rhythm
walkin' with the dead, trying to make a living

good to see you post again :)

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