add on in the form of an extension to the story...it can take whatever kind of turn you see fit

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Gerard has a muscular build
boulders for legs
and his sand dune colored skin
covered the mountains of his arms
he was sexy to grown women
but Sophie knew nothing of grown women talk
she was a snowflake
coal in color
delicate in frame
Sophie loved popsicles though
Lorraine her bossy friend said
Sophie liked blue popsicles best because she was strange
Sophie really didn't like to be bossed
but she loved Lorraine though
Gerard thought Lorraine was too busy for an eight year old
Sophie was nine but frail enough to be mistaken for seven
at the turn of winter
the sand dune mountain arms
lifted a snowflake and melted it
like blue popsicles turning to syrupy puddles
a busy eight year old knew nothing of
how Sophie might now boss her with grown woman talk
cause she understood it now