67913, RE: Reading between the lines Posted by invisible ink, Tue May-01-07 01:17 PM
this was my favorite part: so he gazed into my eyes riding down twenty headed back to the westside we make small talk about how he don't like cigarretes and i'm the only one to every smoke while in his car he reminices on how my man just stright out of the blue offered him trees "what kinda landlord, you getting, jai?" is the question he's asking and i sit there i laugh a bit then he turns to me his eyes new with glee as he admits "i would have smoked some green if you would have too...
I'm not big on rhyming in poetry so when it got to that part i kinda switched off a bit...but this was most definitely felt...miss k
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