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67108, ____________
Posted by KnowOne, Mon Apr-09-07 09:15 AM
Sticks and Stones
May Break My Bones
But Words Will Never Hurt Me
A Passed On Lie
Told Often By
A Child Who's Still Naive
I Dont know
I Dont Care
I DONT CARE WHAT YOU THINK
But Deep Inside
In The Back Of My Mind
My Spirits Start To Sink
Ive Banged My Shin
Ive Stubbed My Toe
Ive Stepped Upon A Nail
But By Far The Worst
Was When Your Words
My Soul They Did Impale
Now Ive Got Another Rhyme
I Keep Inside For Me
And Now I Write It Down In Ink
For Everyone To See
Sticks And Stones
Could Break My Bones
But A Word
Will be What Kills Me
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67117, peace
Posted by morpheme, Mon Apr-09-07 05:07 PM
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67118, it's so easy to say
Posted by mindful, Mon Apr-09-07 05:16 PM
"fuck what you think" or "fuck how you think," but everyone is not the same...
But By Far The Worst
Was When Your Words
My Soul They Did Impale
Now Ive Got Another Rhyme
I Keep Inside For Me
And Now I Write It Down In Ink
For Everyone To See
Sticks And Stones
Could Break My Bones
But A Word
Will be What Kills Me
i feel like i need to type "hang in there man, please." Peace~
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67127, co-sign /nm
Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Mon Apr-09-07 09:17 PM
"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost
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67121, RE: ____________
Posted by meccau, Mon Apr-09-07 06:49 PM
i wish there was more patterns in the rhythm....
I wish you use your words to start the peice, and not a cliche..
being real....
hope you can do the same.
paz.
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67131, I've Got ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Apr-09-07 09:28 PM
Ace Bandages -- Alcohol -- Bandaids -- & -- Peroxide ...
Nurse Nightengale to the rescue -- :P
Helpin' U ^UP^ ------ You okay boo?
..::INBOX::..
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67140, I can feel ur pain through this *hugs*
Posted by Mrs_Mallory, Tue Apr-10-07 01:23 AM
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67147, RE: ____________
Posted by the_best_part, Tue Apr-10-07 08:54 AM
ha. im with you.
my sis usta tell me, 'you wear your heart on your sleeve. you need to develop thicker skin'
that would always put some weird visuals in my head.
the ability to care is way under-rated. because i care, i get hurt, but because i care, i feel love. i wouldnt have it any other way.
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67152, Hmmm!
Posted by ThaAnthology, Tue Apr-10-07 11:08 AM
Yo, you need to drop more yo! This is serious. But ah... keeping one's word can at times be the hardest thing to do. Yeah, I hear you mayne.
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67167, RE: ____________
Posted by WILDOUT, Tue Apr-10-07 09:44 PM
perhaps, but only because the breath of life is with us
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67168, RE: ____________
Posted by ASIEM, Tue Apr-10-07 10:15 PM
this places things in perspective
sort of like how it's said don't worry about people that don't reply to your shit but you reply to their's
the same spirit in this is felt when you believe a word from the respected or old memebers could help inspire. inside (i feel) like something is not quite right about my work especially when the views exceed the replies most times 10 fold.
???
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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67169, digressing with you is like a trip down a silly slide
Posted by marijane, Wed Apr-11-07 12:16 AM
and I'm playing piggy back
keep shining and remember what I said
peace
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