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66356, school boy crush
Posted by AidenWaves, Fri Mar-30-07 05:27 PM
can we
escape sublime epiphonies
and run rampid
through thoughts of
here and now

not eternaties

can we move like the wind
soft and smooth
changing course
getting rough
and ridged

should we howl like wolves
at the full moon?
or spin webs of silk
the way aracnid do?
or even come to terms with our mortality
and find a way to breathe
more easily?

would you kiss me in the regions of black sand
and caress my pink rose
it's scent saturating what makes you a man
and if all of these things do come true
one day
would it be okay
to say
i love you


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66357, OH man, i love this piece, cotton candy sweet
Posted by Mrs_Mallory, Fri Mar-30-07 05:35 PM
makes me want to cuddle up to my S.O. :0(
66398, RE: OH man, i love this piece, cotton candy sweet
Posted by AidenWaves, Sat Mar-31-07 04:05 AM
Yo, what's an S.O.???? thanks for the love, ma....it's much appreciated.

Ciao!
66399, sup man?
Posted by empro, Sat Mar-31-07 05:32 AM
How & Where you been?
66418, RE: sup man?
Posted by AidenWaves, Sat Mar-31-07 12:50 PM
been here and there...i've been good and bad...what's goin on with you kid? how's the Cali life treating you?

66592, so - significant other
Posted by Mrs_Mallory, Sun Apr-01-07 09:21 PM
67033, RE: so - significant other
Posted by AidenWaves, Fri Apr-06-07 04:54 PM
Duh...i should have known that...wish i had one...i just have a school boy crush...(cute guy at work)...LOL! thanks a gain for hte love ma!
66469, Awwwwwww -- How Sweeeeet ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Apr-01-07 12:41 AM
Itz been awhile since you've dropped candy on the board ... :P


*Yummmm*





67034, RE: Awwwwwww -- How Sweeeeet ...
Posted by AidenWaves, Fri Apr-06-07 04:55 PM
yeah, you know the candy man likes to sprinkle cherry flavored rain sporatically...but i can't stay away for long.
66482, this is that
Posted by Zin, Sun Apr-01-07 02:03 AM
gurl you stole my heart for the evening ...kiss my cheek move in you confused things ...

i liked the writing ....Z(EYE)
67035, RE: this is that
Posted by AidenWaves, Fri Apr-06-07 04:56 PM
not too many cats dig my writing, that is once they find out i'm a man....and you prolly will rethink this whole piece now, but, ehh...que sera sera...


66494, hmm
Posted by Ezzsential, Sun Apr-01-07 02:22 AM
this was cute and brought back sentiments from childhood

first love innocent.. nice




shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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67036, RE: hmm
Posted by AidenWaves, Fri Apr-06-07 04:58 PM
hi E...i've missed you... glad you liked it....not love, but, sumthin...you ever meet someone and they give you this feelin...not butterflies, but sumthin....that's this cat...anyway, i dye-gress...muah!
67053, RE: hmm
Posted by Ezzsential, Sat Apr-07-07 05:13 AM
lol yess ofcourse! good luck witthat.. hows it going anyway? havent seen u here in a while



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67327, RE: hmm
Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Apr-15-07 04:36 AM
been working, trying to get to the next plain to do my bidding...how's everything w/ you?
66587, 3rd stanza
Posted by mindful, Sun Apr-01-07 08:39 PM
is where it's at for me. *nods* peace~

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67037, RE: 3rd stanza
Posted by AidenWaves, Fri Apr-06-07 04:59 PM
ms. ful, you're gonna bring out hte inner queen in me that every sgl man in the world has...that was a hot one tho, huh? glad you liked it....oh, and when are we gonna meet. we live in the same damn city. muah!
67042, RE: school boy crush
Posted by ASIEM, Fri Apr-06-07 07:13 PM
this is just nice poetry...beautiful
i like the aracnid usage

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
67328, RE: school boy crush
Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Apr-15-07 04:40 AM
Whuddup AYE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've missed you! thank you....muchos gracias, papo. but the jokes on me...yet again i fall victum to the "straight boy crush", so guess what new song i wrote...you guessed it. let me stop rambling. thanks again.

67170, hey hermanitto
Posted by marijane, Wed Apr-11-07 12:19 AM
te amo

and I'm not ignoring your calls..i was on my excersion!

funny how you live at my house and THIS is the way we communicate

kisses

and I am SO proud of you. It takes courage!

did you take my painting to them?

good to see you back using your gift.
67329, RE: hey hermanitto
Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Apr-15-07 04:42 AM
Hey, bay-bay.... thank you, than you very much...they have it hanging over their bed... the love it...but he's straight....