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Topic subjectNo Thanks!
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=66214
66214, No Thanks!
Posted by Mrs_Mallory, Wed Mar-28-07 07:01 PM
dedicate this one to the fuckface at work that just won't stop...

"NO THANKS"


He
Says he likes the way I make him feel when I take time
To say hello in the morning when I’m passing by


He
Says he’d like to take me places and how he’d love to show me
The various scents of state-to-state flowers


He
Says he wants to show me the different tones of
Black and blues that the night covers in C-A to G-A


He
Says he likes how my eye lashes compliment my almonds
And curl effortlessly like smoke from a cancer stick


He
Says he likes how I handle the forms delicately, he dashes from behind
With the bent of my exposed wrist, he picks it up, and butterfly kissed it gently


He
Says he likes how my skin is neither quite brown, nor quite white
And how he’d like to explore the color I am when there’s no light


He
Says he’d like the opportunity to caress and knead my period
To a feverishly elongated exclamation mark


Boldly…


He
Wonders out loud if I like cuddling to 45’s
Or if I’d rather sexercise to sounds of our panting
While in positions like the number 5


He
pays a lot for saying, and invests not 1 care to asking
So with my stern stare, and him in front of me


My breath and lips presses out firmly…
66221, RE: No Thanks!
Posted by HueyNewton, Wed Mar-28-07 07:59 PM
whoa where did that come from . .
66263, UMmmm... from the dome, is that a good thing or bad thing???
Posted by Mrs_Mallory, Thu Mar-29-07 11:10 AM
66723, It's A Good Thing ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Apr-03-07 10:03 AM
*Trust*


Nice~Ness laced with Icy~ness ...


(((Chillin')))


66273, RE: No Thanks!
Posted by freedomfighter, Thu Mar-29-07 04:58 PM
i like
but i don't have to be on your lap top
or on your full size breast but as long
as i'm off in the warm corner of a pocket
i kool you go girl i find peace in my empty
life of having nothing more to do then sit
here on the net and talk to you

i've learn to be pt and correct my on mistakes
this was great-respect

remember we all are stars
and wether or not we have the same thing as an actor actress
rap writer movie maker we will all shine the same we all was
made the same no difference but the people we know with helping
hands

love yeah
66710, Aren't there Human resource centers
Posted by ThaAnthology, Tue Apr-03-07 07:59 AM
for dudes like him...lol Good piece yo.
66715, sounds like a major creep, stay on your toes lady
Posted by mindful, Tue Apr-03-07 08:24 AM
He
Says he wants to show me the different tones of
Black and blues that the night covers in C-A to G-A


He
Says he likes how my eye lashes compliment my almonds
And curl effortlessly like smoke from a cancer stick


He
Says he likes how I handle the forms delicately, he dashes from behind
With the bent of my exposed wrist, he picks it up, and butterfly kissed it gently



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66734, RE: No Thanks!
Posted by southernboy_423, Tue Apr-03-07 12:04 PM
He
pays a lot for saying, and invests not 1 care to asking
So with my stern stare, and him in front of me



nice piece i slept on it, sorry
never again will i,

peace


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66736, Same here
Posted by SONO DEF, Tue Apr-03-07 12:12 PM
I liked this, dope piece