punctuation such as too many commas looks annoying to me and takes away from the rhyme

bars are ok meaning "/" but do take away

I think that just a space (return key) between bars is the best way
because we want to concentrate on content not grammar

and yeah-you gotta spell things properly
but yeah its ok to end things in A instead of R
and if you want a word to be pronounced differently so you spelled it differently to rhyme then put in parenthesis the word spelled correctly


just some advice




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