This works really well for me: just some advice


When you battle I think it sounds better when you don't rhyme the last word in the rhyme with another last word-well for every sentence

You can switch it up and rhyme the last word with the first word in the next sentence
it makes it seem more creative and makes it flow better
then you change the whole rhyme scheme

Example:

Ya'll don't know I bring heat to ya kitchen
smitten I'm dissin so cold wearing mittens



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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