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65257, worked to death - haiku
Posted by PG, Wed Mar-14-07 10:52 AM
a life rehearsal
looking the worse for it all
and then curtains fall
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65306, worked to death - haiku II
Posted by PG, Thu Mar-15-07 01:25 PM
grind another out
regardless of your own doubt
what life is about
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65318, i like the first better
Posted by mindful, Thu Mar-15-07 07:50 PM
*nods*
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66209, Co-sign /nm
Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Wed Mar-28-07 05:27 PM
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65357, RE: worked to death - haiku
Posted by Travis Holden, Fri Mar-16-07 06:09 PM
Yeah agreed, I like the first one, rehearsal->curtains fall. nice piece people sleep on haikus but I liked this one peace
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65386, Both -- Nice ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-17-07 01:24 AM
Looks like you could give Delrica a run for her money -- :9
I wonder what a Haiku battle would look like ... -- *chuckles*
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65626, worked to death - haiku II"I"
Posted by PG, Tue Mar-20-07 03:14 PM
even just one day
to say to you what I would
the peace of goodbye
II"I" RIP
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65628, RE: you
Posted by freedomfighter, Tue Mar-20-07 03:21 PM
what if what no love
beat found stratus fears touching new
on my nerves i'm with
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65763, those were hot but
Posted by Ezzsential, Thu Mar-22-07 10:12 PM
i thought haikus had to have nature in them?
shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation
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66029, :P
Posted by PG, Mon Mar-26-07 05:38 PM
ok I'm being contemporary if not disciplined.. I could stretch to say "life" and "day" are pieces of nature but I may as well say everything in existence is implicity natural...
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66152, na i was askin
Posted by Ezzsential, Tue Mar-27-07 11:08 PM
nm
shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation
...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
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66270, RE: those were hot but
Posted by tonka truck, Thu Mar-29-07 04:19 PM
love is natural
TE-TE
The End - To Everybody
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66030, worked to death - haiku IV
Posted by PG, Mon Mar-26-07 05:47 PM
dripping impatience
give me the whole rush right now
cash in and kill me
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66269, worked to death - haiku V
Posted by PG, Thu Mar-29-07 04:14 PM
degrees separate
my hands and the blood on them
a margin too slight
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66725, worked to death - haiku VI
Posted by PG, Tue Apr-03-07 10:47 AM
in contemplation
exhausted motivation
seeks a paradigm
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66741, RE: worked to death - haiku
Posted by WILDOUT, Tue Apr-03-07 12:51 PM
boh............!
thats so true
round these parts
us hearts call this scene
a monopoly game
a damn shame if you get wasted mang
seriously though check my name
its wildout back in the house once again
trilogy's still in progression
as the ages flow and the karma rolls
three by three where i see by me i know
where-ever i go whatever i be
this society has got no true spot for me
you play your part on the alloted slot on the board games
and do your time to survive this age
and no sage would condone the way the machines kill and revive us
its only the machine in this way that survives us
and thrives on us maliciously against the best of all our abilities
because we are ancient souls astral travels in progression
our presence on this Earth is made of complexed blessings
and lessons are learnt waking up amidst all this confusion
but i know in my heart that this is just the shadow of illusion
alluding as a shadow to the object of my mission
we are gods children this is just a transition
peace
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66759, RE: worked to death - haiku
Posted by LegacyEarth, Tue Apr-03-07 05:01 PM
Nicely done. You must have a job similar to mine. WHEW
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67186, worked to death - haiku VII
Posted by PG, Wed Apr-11-07 02:15 PM
in which direction
should the spinning be focused
so ineffective
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67188, RE: worked to death - haiku VIII
Posted by PG, Wed Apr-11-07 02:21 PM
would that I knew fate
to labour only in love
and not this disgust
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67473, worked to death - haiku IX
Posted by PG, Wed Apr-18-07 11:45 AM
sixteen hours of shit
with all the first world guilt
but no running water
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67670, worked to death - haiku X
Posted by PG, Tue Apr-24-07 01:08 PM
fuck you and your horse
I am not your prostitute
this is not worth it
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67695, RE: worked to death - haiku
Posted by robynwildchild, Tue Apr-24-07 09:08 PM
got up this morning
left sleep for the day ahead
out the door i go..........
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67818, RE: worked to death - haiku
Posted by freedomfighter, Fri Apr-27-07 04:49 PM
what 2 do strang fruit
packs moon's crack pot critic stage no
voice they will see chilie
Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines
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67856, RE: worked to death - haiku
Posted by southqueens, Sun Apr-29-07 02:33 PM
i like this...captures my monday mornings quite well.
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67881, worked to death - haiku XI
Posted by PG, Mon Apr-30-07 01:13 PM
Day in and day out
Over and over again
Ripped the fuck off!
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67887, RE: e-120
Posted by tonka truck, Mon Apr-30-07 06:44 PM
shift paid baggy jeans
holds body water ladies yell
don't stop progress
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71880, worked to death - haiku XII
Posted by PG, Thu Jan-03-08 02:55 PM
shoot me in the head
beat my body black and blue
I'm through with you
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