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64599, this Posted by mindful, Tue Feb-27-07 08:21 PM
leaves me with the feeling of wanting more, yet... pushes me to draw my own conclusion...
"For the first time I wasn't sure it existed.
I see that I allowed this Now its a question of which direction I chose to walk"
i liked how the above lines were so direct, matter of factly (if you will). they ended the poem well. Peace~
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something like a chameleon.
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