Bee's swarm when E's torn
Died and reborn in the same night
Sworn to never conform, but an army he did form
Armed to the teeth ready to storm in and breach
Now in formation
"OK!" he yells..../ Hennessey mixed with OJ got em 'slightly tipsy, but no hesitation
Positioned with poisons pens, riffles, and a syringe in the back of an alley

"What’s your 20?"

Los Angeles, Cali
I author, spit shine, tap spine then recline
Switch the pitch in my tone whenever I expose foes with flows on microphones
Initial and bomb any residential
Regal he sits
Prop. Joe with lyrical blow, moving that Presidential
Comin from the hood / Raised waist deep in it even before I stood
So it's no need to elaborate on why my thesis spits feces on wackness you thought was straight
2008 is my year just like Barak Obama
I put that on my momma …
Sweaty palms drop napalm bombs hittin Navigators, Hummers, and Escalades
Switch blades held underneath tongues heat - seeks geeks outta caves just like Saddam and Osama
The hour of drama inside the unit of trauma is where it goes down
King of verbal *bling* got me greedy, and wanting another ring
But for now, I'll be fine with your lost shine and crown

Hope this doesn't get overlooked, I liked this piece, even more so after I read it out loud to myself, couldn't pick a favorite line cause really throughout the whole piece you maintained your wordplay and format. Nice post peace

reading this outloud. like i could be one of those too cool for school people who are used to spitting something hot while a band does their thing behind them.

Bee's swarm when E's torn
Died and reborn in the same night
Sworn to never conform, but an army he did form
Armed to the teeth ready to storm in and breach
Now in formation
"OK!" he yells..../ Hennessey mixed with OJ got em 'slightly tipsy, but no hesitation
Positioned with poisons pens, riffles, and a syringe in the back of an alley

Why thank you


;x

you deliver some smooth ass lines yo and then you tend to drop the occasional corny ones but i think we all do that at times...you rising tho chief...and the smooth shit def outweighs the corny shit...peace

I actually thought this was an AUDIO (Soundtrack) -- *grrrrrr* -- x(

I guess we gon' have to help you with that, huh? -- :9


Tight Flow, Mr. Pro!


2007 -- Take it to da next level -- (((AUDIO)))

good look