Go back to previous topic | Forum name | Freestyle Board | Topic subject | Across the pages | Topic URL | http://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=64357 |
64357, Across the pages Posted by ak_reborn, Thu Feb-22-07 12:30 PM
Yo,Across prose readings, my style is feeding slums, beats heat the streets, i spit that poison from the tongue, like the bullet of a gun, images dawning as if i light like the sun, public enemy number one, just a rap rebbel with 100 scores to settle, a page of implicit meaning proves my mettle, the message,braille vision, a sudden cause for emission, as i release the beast, the pages are written in ink, wet fluid sinks into the paper as i drink, a bottle of deep blue,death,heaven, matrimony,im only wedded to lyrics embedded, all credit to the effirt that leaves yall guessing.
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64386, RE: Across the pages Posted by Travis Holden, Thu Feb-22-07 10:45 PM
Yo started off nice with good wordplay and structure, overall nice flow and fit together
Across prose readings, my style is feeding slums, beats heat the streets, i spit that poison from the tongue
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