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Topic subjectAcross the pages
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=64357
64357, Across the pages
Posted by ak_reborn, Thu Feb-22-07 12:30 PM


Yo,Across prose readings,
my style is feeding slums,
beats heat the streets,
i spit that poison from the tongue,
like the bullet of a gun,
images dawning as if i light like the sun,
public enemy number one,
just a rap rebbel with 100 scores to settle,
a page of implicit meaning proves my mettle,
the message,braille vision,
a sudden cause for emission,
as i release the beast,
the pages are written in ink,
wet fluid sinks into the paper as i drink,
a bottle of deep blue,death,heaven,
matrimony,im only wedded to lyrics embedded,
all credit to the effirt that leaves yall guessing.
64386, RE: Across the pages
Posted by Travis Holden, Thu Feb-22-07 10:45 PM
Yo started off nice with good wordplay and structure, overall nice flow and fit together

Across prose readings,
my style is feeding slums,
beats heat the streets,
i spit that poison from the tongue