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63814, circumference. Posted by Morehouse, Fri Feb-09-07 11:00 PM
running around circles at the speed of sight measure circumference by the square root of distorted foot peddles in the mush between the metro bus and the curb, awake perturbed, the clouds uninformed darkness, my shadow stylin' on the absent sunlight a casper in the day. i am the disturbed vernacular of my street's concrete...community of individual.
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63827, i didn't feel this until... Posted by mindful, Sat Feb-10-07 11:54 AM
the ending lines:
i am the disturbed vernacular of my street's concrete...community of individual.
but, throughout you gave me a picture to place in my head with the descriptions you used. Peace~
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63848, RE: i didn't feel this until... Posted by Morehouse, Sun Feb-11-07 08:35 PM
thanks for always reading my thoughts. :)
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63877, u're Posted by mindful, Mon Feb-12-07 08:08 PM
welcome *nods*
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63865, RE: circumference. Posted by invisible ink, Mon Feb-12-07 02:35 PM
i am the disturbed vernacular of my street's concrete
whaaa???...you hit it right there...miss k
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63902, RE: circumference. Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Feb-13-07 01:37 AM
When U write Prolific~ly / Astute~ly As YOU do U don't even "need" a whole lotta verbage To hit home / To knock the ball out the park
These words were (((On Target))):
>my shadow >stylin' on the absent sunlight / a casper in the day. >i am the disturbed vernacular of my street's concrete >...community of individual.
*BullsEye*
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