straight-forward, and descriptive as well.

fave lines:

1 week made one weak
find purpose
in letting go
sittin still
waitin
believin
trustin and Prayin
for another
week
to pass
day by day
free from bein
a slave again...

i liked how you used shorter lines for this as well. the most important lines of the poem *for me* are above. i felt as if most of the emotion and *meat* is there. Peace~

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