one weak to flesh
made 1 week
free from pleasures pain
one sick within
has another chance to begin
fantasies playground
the mind
travels light years
searching
for the heart
to yearn reason
find rest and peace
for 1 weak
thru one week
taking captive
the bodies that wanna play
leaving lone emotions
at bay
creeping
stealing
melting once hardened
feelings now memories
get in the way
1 week made one weak
find purpose
in letting go
sittin still
waitin
believin
trustin and Prayin
for another
week
to pass
day by day
free from bein
a slave again...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

I defenitely can relate to that one....that one week is one week closer to overtaking the weakness.....

Methinks you play well with words, kind sir! -- ;)

2 weak to let 2 weeks
of freedom last till
withdrawl eased
so one weak gave
back 1 week of gain
all for the pleasure
of pain in a moment
here then gone
sanity lost
given the cost
idle difference
is now boss
endless loop played
over and over
but 1 weak
for one week
to flesh and feel
just might bail
with this appeal

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

Stick to the one day
Strive for the one day
Master the one day

Let yesterday pass
And tomorrow come
But live in the one day

And before you know it
1 week becomes 2 weeks
then 3 weeks and
then not weak.

from 1 who was also 1 week from being 2 weak.

thank you brother for all the wisdom instruction demonstration acknowledgments criticism thoughts care and most of all thank you for believing in me enough to trust me with your Life...this TRUTH I hope pray will permeate through me and find me faithful enough to BE!

Emanuel "moenay" passed this way December 16, 2013 and left more than memories he left LOVE a fertile ground to plant and harvest...
Rize In Prosperity

the mind
travels light years
searching
for the heart


.....nice drop...miss k

straight-forward, and descriptive as well.

fave lines:

1 week made one weak
find purpose
in letting go
sittin still
waitin
believin
trustin and Prayin
for another
week
to pass
day by day
free from bein
a slave again...

i liked how you used shorter lines for this as well. the most important lines of the poem *for me* are above. i felt as if most of the emotion and *meat* is there. Peace~

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himself will have no rivals." -Benjamin Franklin

"meat" hhhmm? yeh thats where i need to place most of my "meat" too :)
thanks mindful emotion does drop here

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

WOW

All i can say, well ask is how do you do it. These words inspire.

ephie l

*VERITAS*

^^^^
cause sometimes i forget

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

whats often lost to short term memory is sometimes relived and so the pain resides the hope is in meditation i wont repeat without conscious

Powerful stuff

This has got to be one of my favorite by you. The flesh is an interesting vessel.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.