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63324, Hip Hop Poem
Posted by ThaAnthology, Tue Jan-23-07 04:50 PM
Hip Hop Poem
Solid Southern Blues lick venomous fluidity
At molten canvases
Spoiling the view
While Harlemite Jazz men taunt visceral images
Of smoke-laden hues
Draped in needle drips
Nodding away
Into forever
All the while
Hip Hop reminds us that children
Must grow
And if unattended
Trees grow crook-necked
But also that before they die
They find themselves righted
Slighted at times
But righted
Smooth to Barbadian breezes
Kissing feet
Pleading forgiveness
And before eyes close…
Like all predecessors
It is good
© Fahim Malik Nassar
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63366, ~Inhale/Exhale~
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Jan-26-07 02:16 AM
^That^ was refreshing! -- *Delightful Read Indeed*
But these lines really grabbed at my eyelids:
>While Harlemite Jazz men taunt visceral images
>Of smoke-laden hues
>Draped in needle drips
>Nodding away
>Into forever
*Kooooool Daddy*
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63385, thanks yo!
Posted by ThaAnthology, Fri Jan-26-07 06:59 PM
just trying out something new! glad you dug it!
fah.
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