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Topic subjectBrenda
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=63316
63316, Brenda
Posted by ASIEM, Tue Jan-23-07 05:51 AM
you asked me
if i ever loved you
simply yes
reasons make light
the ground we walk
seasons bring fresh
moments to ponder
there is forever a place for us
that time will never illude
so we keep sacred
what has been
that each second
is made perfect in
waking a vision
unnoticed before
our eyes met
and became as One...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
63317, RE: Brenda
Posted by empro, Tue Jan-23-07 05:55 AM
Sounds like you're writing from the heart

Have you let her know?
63326, ooooo...
Posted by bonitaapplebaum71481, Tue Jan-23-07 08:20 PM
I like this... *finger snaps*


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63367, How Love~ly ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Jan-26-07 02:19 AM
Gentle -- Retrospective~ly Reminiscent -- Touching! -- *Sweet~Ness*