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63302, pangea unearthed
Posted by ms mimi diva, Mon Jan-22-07 03:27 PM
stillness
bends towards nature's
rustling weight
chilling stars branch
with poised possibility
delicious dusts
each desire
free as a thousand boughs fallen
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63308, RE: pangea unearthed
Posted by ASIEM, Tue Jan-23-07 12:02 AM
before atlantis there was jurassic and triassic ok thanks for the knowledge
nice lead
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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63331, you're one of the writers
Posted by mindful, Tue Jan-23-07 08:28 PM
i *rush* to read whenever i see a new post up...
sincerely.
favorites, mainly because of the alliteration (which i have a great deal of love for)in one line;
with poised possibility
delicious dusts
each desire
free as a thousand boughs fallen
this was short, sweet, and ended very well. i loved "thousand boughs fallen." Peace~
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63337, mmmmmmm.....
Posted by invisible ink, Wed Jan-24-07 02:13 PM
wow...k
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63352, You are an amazing writer
Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Thu Jan-25-07 05:02 PM
Amazing.
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63364, Heavy -- & Somewhat Haunting ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Jan-26-07 02:07 AM
The weight of so few words -- :)
*Poetic Purity*
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63378, Thanks for the love.. I have been suffering from major writer's block!
Posted by ms mimi diva, Fri Jan-26-07 12:50 PM
I'm having trouble being disciplined....not sure why, either. I missed you guys.
I started a new job, which ironically, gives me more time to write.
Since then I've been working on this screenplay. Writing, be it
poetry or song writing, or a play has been so hard lately.
I stumbled on a writing prompt and this emerged.
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63428, YAY!
Posted by marijane, Sun Jan-28-07 01:44 PM
The writers are BACK!!! Welcome to 07' this was a tasty treat from the title to the last line. YES Keep shining!
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63452, RE: YAY!
Posted by ak_reborn, Mon Jan-29-07 12:16 PM
>stillness
>bends towards nature's
>rustling weight
i favoured these lines
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