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Topic subjectRE: Reaching Out
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62283, RE: Reaching Out
Posted by PepperRutledge, Sun Dec-03-06 11:52 AM
I like the range of emotions in this post....one minute your talking about crying...then being confused...then happy thought of this person.

I think I like this so much because I can relate to it.
Nice piece

>Forgotten mothers of my past..
>memories blast forward into backwords past
>i am what i am and i am confused
>i just want to be a wise fool...
>the fool is the beginning
>with wisdom of my past
>i want to do you right
>
>im tired of the tears
>
>shed for years over me
>
>
>fill your cup not mine
>i runneth over
>i am over me
>
>there is no focal point
>
>but you bring me joy
>
>and im reaching out like the sunrays from the sun
>when i cant even see you your so far away on the horizon
>
>my life is never quite what it seems
>in this third body of this life
>in my wake and my dreams
>
>reaching out


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