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Topic subject21 is not far at all
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=62214&mesg_id=62242
62242, 21 is not far at all
Posted by ToeJam, Thu Nov-30-06 08:53 PM
Yo if you're just spitting boast rhymes
with no real subject
you've got to come with more innovative rhymes than that.
I'm talking about the actual words you are rhyming.
If you're going to rhyme heat and cleat,
at least have another rhyme before those and make it slightly more complex/creative.

Even if it's simple words in a more complex scheme.
I put that heat on your ass
stomp you like a cleat in the grass.

Even a freestyle should have a few...