62242, 21 is not far at all Posted by ToeJam, Thu Nov-30-06 08:53 PM
Yo if you're just spitting boast rhymes with no real subject you've got to come with more innovative rhymes than that. I'm talking about the actual words you are rhyming. If you're going to rhyme heat and cleat, at least have another rhyme before those and make it slightly more complex/creative.
Even if it's simple words in a more complex scheme. I put that heat on your ass stomp you like a cleat in the grass.
Even a freestyle should have a few...
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