I cried today like an open pipe
Inflicted wounds to spite
I let him rip the pages out my open book
Today’s events had me shook

I should have turn around so that you’d stab me in the back
Cause seeing the blade left a scar
Was this the punishment I truly deserved?
I’m sure others did you worse

But its okay I’m not off my feet
my arms still open embracing you
soo bittersweet
I leaned on you and I was forever indebted
I wanted us to celebrate the victory
But to lose my greatest solider
I feel so defeated to fail you
But, honestly I never knew to the extent of height in which you placed me
it wasn't fair, it was way beyond reach
Cause, when you threw me off
it hurt like a bitch
I had no words but my tears had speech

See, I loved more than your energy, more than your sweet glow of innocents, your passion, your commitment so much more than that
you said "loyalty"
define "loyalty" and show me where it says it ends
I drew to much from your strength
I guess I killed you and you still thank me for this?
To continue.. it can never be the same
I had nothing but respect for the man you are and speak about becoming
I called you my friend and I placed you in my heart
But you hung me
With the same rope we used to tug together in this war

You said “he couldn’t of loved you and hurt you”
But in my last breath I ask “so, how did you love me?”

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Bitter~Sweet Journey Indeed!


*Painfully Nice*

I should write more because the above was written at the beginning of a life long relationship..such a long sory but beautiful..

I rarely come on he boards anymore but happy to see Photo's back on:)
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This a very nice piece, wel written thoughout although these line in particular grabbed me

But you hung me
With the same rope we used to tug together in this war


gee

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