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61942, harlem is (a reflection) Posted by ms mimi diva, Tue Nov-21-06 02:48 AM
harlem is hips hardwood big bodied bricks legacy rising like the sun
bathing brownstones over high highs
the pitter patter of ten thousand feet in a dream deep breath echoing against the ear of New York --
music.
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61943, Perfect Posted by empro, Tue Nov-21-06 03:26 AM
>harlem is >hips >hardwood >big bodied bricks >legacy rising >like the sun > >bathing brownstones >over high highs > >the pitter patter of >ten thousand feet >in a dream deep breath >echoing against >the ear of >New York -- > > >music.
Gotta love NY.
DOPE drop. Thanks for sharing
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61944, RE: Perfect Posted by ms mimi diva, Tue Nov-21-06 04:00 AM
Thanks. I visited Harlem for the first time this weekend. Crazy how it is old and new at the same time.
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61948, excellent. Posted by Morehouse, Tue Nov-21-06 04:23 PM
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61950, RE: harlem is (a reflection) Posted by HueyNewton, Tue Nov-21-06 06:06 PM
mimi I couldn't agree more . . ~
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61976, fab you luss !!!! Posted by Phenomenality, Thu Nov-23-06 04:34 AM
absolutely beautiful..
>harlem is >hips >hardwood >big bodied bricks >legacy rising >like the sun > >bathing brownstones >over high highs > >the pitter patter of >ten thousand feet >in a dream deep breath >echoing against >the ear of >New York -- > > >music.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ To change, we must face the dragon of our appetites with another dragon... the life-energy of our Soul...
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61992, RE: fab you luss !!!! Posted by ms mimi diva, Fri Nov-24-06 12:37 PM
I felt very much at home in harlem. And the strange thing is I think the people who lived there although it was like a crazy relationship, have a relationship with the place they live, which is unusual. I really loved the character of the place. I'd love to have a writer's group, like a muse trip, where we could take a bunch of OKP types to visit famous places in the world and write about their stories...
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62016, RE: harlem is (a reflection) Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Nov-25-06 04:25 PM
I live in Texas now, but I was born in N.Y. -- Harlem -- And raised there til' 15yrs. -- So I can relate to your "reflection"
Thanks 4 the memories ...
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62136, RE: harlem is (a reflection) Posted by Solomonchild, Tue Nov-28-06 04:56 PM
sis im lovin it, keep grindin, if u geta shot peep my joints, love.
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62160, 'bout to make me hop the iron horse up there now... Posted by southqueens, Wed Nov-29-06 12:50 PM
i likes, i likes...
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62174, Thank you for all the ink luv Posted by ms mimi diva, Wed Nov-29-06 08:36 PM
:::blushes:::
I submitted this poem to the Kenyon Review. We'll see what they say. Cross your fingers...
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62181, RE: harlem is (a reflection) Posted by jayare214, Wed Nov-29-06 10:18 PM
yeah thats lovely right there.... it moves....
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62216, RE: harlem is (a reflection) Posted by soulchild, Thu Nov-30-06 06:25 AM
that's nice.
soul.
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62322, RE: harlem is (a reflection) Posted by invisible ink, Tue Dec-05-06 04:52 PM
I was born and grew up in harlem...and i always think when people try to describe the vibe...they miss it entirely...I'm so glad that finally some one wrote it right...this was righteous reading...miss k
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62326, RE: harlem is (a reflection) Posted by ms mimi diva, Tue Dec-05-06 08:27 PM
I take that as a compliment from real NYers!
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62377, u should Posted by invisible ink, Thu Dec-07-06 02:48 PM
this was really the soul of the Harlem vibe...k
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62348, harlem is Posted by rubbersoulonice, Wed Dec-06-06 04:08 PM
waiting on the other end of the one as I sit here at 116 and sigh into the track spaces sitting in the midnight wind with firetrucks reaching and cabs parked and santo domingan sandwiches every block harlem is my room on the second floor with one light lit when I walk in the door is the drawing space on my wall is the mouse in my kitchen that runs over my foot at two am is an incense newsstand is the candle of the Virgin of Pain ------------------------------ Something like Eldridge Cleaver meets John Lennon
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62378, RE: harlem is Posted by invisible ink, Thu Dec-07-06 02:58 PM
harlem is red beans and rice and mr softee trucks that that stay the course to we all get vanilla cones with chocolate sprinkles harlem is lights coming on at 10pm so we know where our children are, sistas livin'in red brick housing with gucci shoes in places where cabs don't go it's the flow against traffic on 8th avenue where apollo dreams come true.
sorry i was feelin' it (lol)...miss k
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62386, it's the flow against traffic where apollo dreams come true. Posted by ms mimi diva, Thu Dec-07-06 07:24 PM
it's the flow against traffic on 8th avenue where apollo dreams come true.
*snaps*
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62426, slick Posted by UncleClimax, Fri Dec-08-06 07:38 PM
i dig...i was only in harlem for a minute this past summer, but i kinda got a feeling similar to this even just then....hood
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