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Topic subjectWonderland built for We
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61565, Wonderland built for We
Posted by revalation, Tue Oct-31-06 04:49 PM
I will sit still under the trees
in the vast land built for we

Lay out amongst the leaves

bumble bees
singing breeze

I'll watch you in the distance

strolling down the hill

skipping through the daphodils

eating of the green grass that grows there

in one hand you'll have a map

in the other a bottle of water

we'll walk along the river banks

down steep and rolling slopes

You'll catch me when I fall and I'll lift you from the thick

Into the forest our minds are born

into the dark of the over growth we will build our secret home

and a ray of light will shine there

that ray of light will help us grow there

that ray of light is what guides us there

and there we will live in quiet harmony

bears and deer will walk along we

we'll create a wonderland

prancing rabbits

hummingbirds

butterfly's swarming

flowers surround us blooming


I will go there with you...

lets create our map

you bring the water bottle

I'll bring a way to watch time lapse



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61570, RE: Wonderland built for We
Posted by Pit Bull, Tue Oct-31-06 05:26 PM
this is gonna sound weird.. but this as a spoken word over 'Down for the Count's beat would be hot..


Ha, anyway, to be serious.. I liked the imagery used here. I love the forest and the mountains out in the Tahoe national forest just up the freeway from me, and this reminded me of that, of 'the Hole', our own private little swimming spot..

This was 'nice'. It was cozy, comfortable, and warm, like a warm, lazy summer day.

thanks for brightening my day a bit.