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61565, Wonderland built for We Posted by revalation, Tue Oct-31-06 04:49 PM
I will sit still under the trees in the vast land built for we
Lay out amongst the leaves
bumble bees singing breeze
I'll watch you in the distance
strolling down the hill
skipping through the daphodils
eating of the green grass that grows there
in one hand you'll have a map
in the other a bottle of water
we'll walk along the river banks
down steep and rolling slopes
You'll catch me when I fall and I'll lift you from the thick
Into the forest our minds are born
into the dark of the over growth we will build our secret home
and a ray of light will shine there
that ray of light will help us grow there
that ray of light is what guides us there
and there we will live in quiet harmony
bears and deer will walk along we
we'll create a wonderland
prancing rabbits
hummingbirds
butterfly's swarming
flowers surround us blooming
I will go there with you...
lets create our map
you bring the water bottle
I'll bring a way to watch time lapse
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61570, RE: Wonderland built for We Posted by Pit Bull, Tue Oct-31-06 05:26 PM
this is gonna sound weird.. but this as a spoken word over 'Down for the Count's beat would be hot..
Ha, anyway, to be serious.. I liked the imagery used here. I love the forest and the mountains out in the Tahoe national forest just up the freeway from me, and this reminded me of that, of 'the Hole', our own private little swimming spot..
This was 'nice'. It was cozy, comfortable, and warm, like a warm, lazy summer day.
thanks for brightening my day a bit.
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