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61259, i'm doing pretty good
Posted by mindful, Mon Oct-16-06 05:41 PM
thank you kindly...

were you expecting more than this to happen on last thursday:

last thursday your face met
mine with those big eyes
and i could only remember
the laugh lines near your lips.
you appeared with your hands
folded across your chest begging
for me to label you and i something
more than we are.

thank you for your words. i didn't really want the character focused on the ex more than necessary, just the past memories and meeting up with his sister. i'll rethink this tho. :-)

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