60949, RE: One Night Stand Posted by ToeJam, Fri Oct-06-06 12:19 PM
Yeah. I got the metaphor. Either way, comparing music to sex or sex to music, same difference.
This felt like a bunch of generic R&B lines strung together. Even if the idea was original, the execution doesn't convey that.
And your rhymes are nursery school. Sorry.
Keep building.
Peace.
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