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Topic subjectRE: One Night Stand
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60949, RE: One Night Stand
Posted by ToeJam, Fri Oct-06-06 12:19 PM
Yeah. I got the metaphor. Either way, comparing music to sex or sex to music, same difference.

This felt like a bunch of generic R&B lines strung together. Even if the idea was original, the execution doesn't convey that.

And your rhymes are nursery school. Sorry.

Keep building.