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60832, haikus for days - join in Posted by Morehouse, Tue Oct-03-06 11:16 AM
autumn upon us like falling leaves on shoulders bleed red and orange
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myself is sculptor of your body’s idiom: the musician of your wrists; the poet who is afraid only to mistranslate a rhythm in your hair... -E.E. Cummings
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60833, *Ahem* Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Tue Oct-03-06 11:40 AM
Baby, you know me Wash summer's sweat off your toes I'm ready to eat
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60834, RE: bouncing Posted by freedomfighter, Tue Oct-03-06 11:43 AM
thanks but no thanks southern girts gets caught between blank checks
Freeworld Order Dangurus Mines
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60940, Thank You Posted by seraph219, Fri Oct-06-06 10:53 AM
But no hankering See her grits get caught between Blank looks and buckteeth
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60844, RE: haikus for days - join in Posted by the_best_part, Tue Oct-03-06 01:37 PM
ive come to accept that i dont even like it let along, miss it
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60845, RE: haikus for days - join in Posted by tonka truck, Tue Oct-03-06 02:09 PM
releasing the ghost nothing is supported malice conspires fruit under
tree of life 666 wife is stronger vessel less mussel sustain
universal components macro phase in all ages grow up to be like seed
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60846, RE: haikus for days - join in Posted by the_best_part, Tue Oct-03-06 02:47 PM
holding on to pain clutching tight to bitter woe compromises love
evil is disguised as comic book drawings of babes conquering souls
there is a secret it will only be revealed when silence is born
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60871, RE: haikus for days - join in Posted by freedomfighter, Wed Oct-04-06 09:32 AM
passion decease win love pricks thrones roses pedal peace
within kingdoms fail 2 exist between colume of events
artistic vision threw ray charles glasses i's c beyond herstory
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60847, oops Posted by the_best_part, Tue Oct-03-06 02:48 PM
nm
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60854, i love fall Posted by mindful, Tue Oct-03-06 05:47 PM
i loved these lines as well
like falling leaves on shoulders bleed red and orange
*nods*
--------------------------------------- Pinwheels and HulaHoops|the book http://www.lulu.com/content/132318 http://msmind.blogspot.com|the life
La magie, est dans ses yeux. le prodige est dans son âme.
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60874, A Small House Posted by grape, Wed Oct-04-06 10:51 AM
Since I have nothing people say I have nothing. What else do I need?
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60929, Sweet Potato Pie Posted by grape, Fri Oct-06-06 01:38 AM
“He looks like hisself” Blue and white and Black and black. Speech. Salute. Pow! Taps.
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60930, Fruit Trees Posted by grape, Fri Oct-06-06 01:57 AM
That day, we ate So much grapefruit, my lips started to pucker like, “Daaamn!”
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60931, 22nd Posted by grape, Fri Oct-06-06 02:17 AM
See now, I gots all my numbas uphea. read. READ! yea. yea. Naw! Dammit.
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60932, An Angel in Ordinary Clothes Posted by grape, Fri Oct-06-06 02:27 AM
Do you remember? I was there when you were there. Yalookjusthasame.
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60933, Mantra Posted by grape, Fri Oct-06-06 03:09 AM
“There is nothing wrong with searching for the best greens.” Look, just drive the car.
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60939, RE: Mantra Posted by seraph219, Fri Oct-06-06 10:44 AM
I think you're on to something...
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60934, Mahalia Jackson Posted by grape, Fri Oct-06-06 04:03 AM
There's no need to cry --WeLL-- don't fear now.--Nunna that. YES! Amen. A men.
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60878, hearsay Posted by Morehouse, Wed Oct-04-06 12:41 PM
she said no two times he thought he heard yes when she tried to yell for help
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myself is sculptor of your body’s idiom: the musician of your wrists; the poet who is afraid only to mistranslate a rhythm in your hair... -E.E. Cummings
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60879, Wow... Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Wed Oct-04-06 01:12 PM
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60889, herstory Posted by the_best_part, Wed Oct-04-06 10:42 PM
i usta be a poetess, now im just a girl that thinks too much
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60892, RE: lack of attention Posted by tonka truck, Thu Oct-05-06 08:21 AM
good ideas tainted panties and bad representations of sound effects
produce nothing but unreachable tabloids juvenile detention
i write what the rock's have been waiting to say "B"
tsuj esuaceb-go on i'm just trying out my new pen
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60935, proposal Posted by the_best_part, Fri Oct-06-06 07:49 AM
i guess i should'nt have expected traditional but i still said yes
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60936, RE: neck tie Posted by tonka truck, Fri Oct-06-06 08:48 AM
turtles run risk crossing finish line first but without permission
did you spy? one day the scope will crack self image of power
found between five fingers prison notes sketched on bathroom stall motors lock in need of love
TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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60945, Please look up haiku Posted by ToeJam, Fri Oct-06-06 11:58 AM
And learn to count.
Pet peeve.
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60985, RE: Please shut the fuck up Posted by tonka truck, Sat Oct-07-06 09:39 AM
bitch get down on all fours fuck style i just get wild and say what i want got a problem ill rock them after thoughts of toejam spam i call you out along time ago and you was like an afro falling out dick rider
come and create a bow tie and watch you get punched in yo eye!
i don't give a dam about none of you i shit on post and boast while eating oats call me mr. feel good i'm happy popping shit like bubble yum
TE-TE The End To Everybody
P>S< i tried my soul for a knife i tried my soul to slice i tried my soul for all those who ever took my shit for gran it and tried to duplicate it i flying in hell but those who stole from me is left behind wit no fucking bail because go tell the supreme government i will not fail and i'm bringing pharoahs army to spit over yo................figure it ass wholes!
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60937, Blowing In The Wind Posted by seraph219, Fri Oct-06-06 10:26 AM
Five-dollar phrase-up Passive-aggressive-psuedo- Transgressive poets
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60938, Hatchet-Words Posted by seraph219, Fri Oct-06-06 10:39 AM
Acres of blue ink Course poems that spill trill spur Recycled racket
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60941, Lips Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Fri Oct-06-06 11:05 AM
Yes I love sweet toes But a woman with big lips Has the best sugar
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60981, pain Posted by Instant_Vintage, Sat Oct-07-06 05:00 AM
strangers fire shots you know you are a big guy part of me just died
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60982, tangled web Posted by Instant_Vintage, Sat Oct-07-06 05:03 AM
spiders use the web sick perverts also do to are spiders perverts?
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60983, more pain Posted by Instant_Vintage, Sat Oct-07-06 05:06 AM
you dont know me but take liberties with your words you really ARE small
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61072, lol... Posted by Morehouse, Wed Oct-11-06 01:59 PM
and your sig is genius.
peace
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60987, Taking a stab: Posted by Whateva, Sat Oct-07-06 10:29 AM
stick shift in new gear Beyond Philadelphia gravity shortage
baby steps to God Bus to distant nebulas logic complacent
tool shed, hammer and nail universe, meditation innocent bystander...Bang!!
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61006, good post. Posted by blaksilence, Sun Oct-08-06 01:21 PM
disrobing orchids tuck their nudity into shrivels and sleep bronze
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61007, pale face whirlwinds lick Posted by blaksilence, Sun Oct-08-06 01:27 PM
us with angel crust moon waves and we smile, succumb
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61008, her arms stretch whispers Posted by blaksilence, Sun Oct-08-06 01:34 PM
over burnt blankets of plush
cold warmth in a hug
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61069, RE: ruby Posted by freedomfighter, Wed Oct-11-06 12:49 PM
sprinting across brains mount rush more points 2 gate way space becomes structured
cities build classes bearing service man's notice rich clog drain poor flash
hold cell phone magic and nature condems it's self 4 being a bug
liter
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61074, RE: haikus for days - join in Posted by marijane, Wed Oct-11-06 02:15 PM
wonder why ya'll nigs don't reply to my shit Guess i lost my love
just something abstact i thought i'd write
www.myspace.com/marijaneraps
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61080, haiku Posted by rubbersoulonice, Wed Oct-11-06 04:31 PM
plum leaves fall from small town girls I loved afar city drizzles midautumnal
------------------------------ Something like Eldridge Cleaver meets John Lennon
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61095, RE: texas memory Posted by tonka truck, Thu Oct-12-06 08:50 AM
jasper touch and go streets whispers murder breakfast does eggs come with that?
all runny nose flu coughing in summer season make way for foot ball
i love winter time except 4 all those snow flakes blowing pipes 2 dust
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61210, good job, family. i'm a little mad that Posted by blaksilence, Sun Oct-15-06 03:05 PM
you cussed at the brother up there when he was just trying to help you.
but
shrug.
these are good:
>jasper touch and go >streets whispers murder breakfast >does eggs come with that?
>all runny nose flu >coughing in summer season >make way for foot ball
>i love winter time >except 4 all those snow flakes >blowing pipes 2 dust
keep at it.
easy.
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61223, RE: 1st Posted by tonka truck, Mon Oct-16-06 08:52 AM
not words but app-roach smokes in ash tray kill season targets ducks resting
v shape one leaves pack finding public square burger belly full pot luck
call it success when your the only one who can see ending blood shead
but for real that's between me and that bitch i rip a new whole in his/her chest take 2 paces backward like a knight in chess use mr. clean to clean up the mess pour out a little vodka and say he was bless
on the real i don't like these mf here i just come here for intertainment when ever the fuck people want to responsed i feel like i'm holding all the keys and i choose no to please but to leave things as they are
jealousy is a mother fucker! duke chill wit the applies i rather not talk on personal levels?
p.s and i'm not you fam dick head
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61230, get off of that special ed. shit family Posted by blaksilence, Mon Oct-16-06 10:02 AM
and
where the fk is the 'second'?
when someone types '1st'
then there's usually a second
i scrolled through that entire bullshit like:
1st what nigga?
but eh
if it's a problem, let it be what it is
i'm here
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61233, RE: sounds Posted by tonka truck, Mon Oct-16-06 10:15 AM
like you already been fucked thats wuz up and you need to give up the paxel (little yellow bus) pit spit 2 day old crack pipe spinning in yo throat like an axel all night
librium prozac and ativan got you snow in sand man grand illusions step out the way before you catch a few alias contusions jam on
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61237, that was the first four consecutive Posted by blaksilence, Mon Oct-16-06 10:41 AM
sentences that have ever made sense under your login
it's almost like that 'special ed.' shit hit close to home...
made you straighten up for a second.
maybe if i say it again then i could actually get through your entire reply
let me try:
timmay.
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61239, RE: that was the first four consecutive Posted by tonka truck, Mon Oct-16-06 11:09 AM
pondering sucking yo moms tit so to make it fit i had to hit and move and catcxh a groove
stay talking and the war lord going to stay walking on you insanity for attempting 2 fuck wit me
an all the dum jokes that shit just float like you ego during indian summer never no when i'ma step in wit a punch line don't blink and it's over mikes coming back
ring king II TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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61242, don't switch back now. i just clicked soulchild's post Posted by blaksilence, Mon Oct-16-06 01:25 PM
and you were in there typing normal
i felt like your fathe...
pause.
i don't know what your home situation is like. your father might be suing lifestyles right about now
pause.
i felt proud tho.
i didn't mean to make you switch back. go ahead and try to type regular again.
it's a good look.
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61268, RE: don't switch back now. i just clicked soulchild's post Posted by tonka truck, Tue Oct-17-06 08:42 AM
what the fuck is you talking? bitch you could never ever ever compare to be? sound like you took way too many dicks in yo ass at last from here on out you'll be talking to youself bitch rest in peace
TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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61272, comedy. Posted by Morehouse, Tue Oct-17-06 10:36 AM
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61402, Weirdest thread... Posted by rubbersoulonice, Mon Oct-23-06 01:46 PM
I ever saw spin out of a haiku about small-town women. ------------------------------ Something like Eldridge Cleaver meets John Lennon
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61284, blood... Posted by blaksilence, Tue Oct-17-06 05:13 PM
i've been ignoring that tough-type shit
because i know that you wouldn't have the heart to even Mumble that shit in my face
but i'll tell you what tho...
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61278, rules Posted by rgv, Tue Oct-17-06 11:17 AM
3-short lines 1-season word 1-cutting word no rhyme or metaphor (17 syllables, 5-7-5)
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61280, lol Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Tue Oct-17-06 11:23 AM
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