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60445, RE: new piece (title welcomed)
Posted by Giovanni, Tue Sep-19-06 12:41 PM
First off, thanks Delrica for checking the piece. This came out of a writing exercise that Derrick and I did at 24/7 on Saturday. We called out five words to each other and came up with a poem on the spot using those five words. Secondly, yes, I did intentionally make houses possessive because of the the "warped wooden porches" on those houses.

Again, thanks for checking. Hopefully, I'll have something new to post up soon. Pacers!!