clever. the first 2, or 3 I hope you don't edit. They pulled me i to a place, and minus police, I think I was there this morning.
These are senryu-like, envoking scenes and senses. Wonder what the final edits will bring in emotion.

">beats a Dj unleashes
>from his makeshift booth
>among the row houses'
>
>warped wooden porches
>of scattered dominoes
>and shuffled cards
>"

and that too.