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60200, A quickee for Lee
Posted by ToeJam, Fri Sep-08-06 03:20 PM
EarthLee

You know
you wield a power
over me

you are one of those
center of gravity people
and I am a moon

I'm waning
becoming sharp
to keep up with you
I am waxing
Philosophical
to get a clue

I am also full
some wld have you believe
of shit
some
of cheese
but there is a reason
I hold
laughter in
high priority

but I'm full of ideas
and way too much passion.
I am covered in craters
little depressions
after many an impact

I create no light

I just reflect

but when you feel your father
the sun
has turned his back on you
I am your light
may I show you how radiant
you are at night?

Sometimes I think I could break orbit
collide with you
but that might leave too much wreckage

so I keep spinning
reality into humor
fact into rumor
cuz who knows what we might know?

Your clouds are colossal
astronomical sunglasses
that even cover your smile
but for all that
I can read you

updated

sunrise

waiting
for your return

your new expedition

to place a flag

claim me

conquored

although no fight

was ever put up.

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60243, RE: A quickee for Lee
Posted by morpheme, Sun Sep-10-06 09:03 PM
Your clouds are colossal
astronomical sunglasses
61170, me too
Posted by rgv, Sat Oct-14-06 10:25 AM
I hold
laughter in
high priority

but I'm full of ideas
and way too much passion.
I am covered in craters
little depressions
after many an impact
61198, RE: A quickee for Lee
Posted by STIMULI, Sun Oct-15-06 11:40 AM

the wording here, i like this.


>I am also full
>some wld have you believe
>of shit
>some
>of cheese
>but there is a reason
>I hold
>laughter in
>high priority
>
>but I'm full of ideas
>and way too much passion.
>I am covered in craters
>little depressions
>after many an impact
>
>I create no light
>
-
>
>Sometimes I think I could break orbit
>collide with you
>but that might leave too much wreckage
>
>so I keep spinning
>reality into humor
>fact into rumor
>cuz who knows what we might know?
>
>Your clouds are colossal
>astronomical sunglasses
>that even cover your smile
>but for all that
>I can read you
>
>updated
>
>sunrise
>
>waiting
>for your return
>
>your new expedition
>
>to place a flag
>
>claim me
>
>conquored
>
>although no fight
>
>was ever put up.




very nice imagery