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59813, i surrender.. Posted by Exotica, Sat Aug-26-06 12:39 AM
your words move me... like sunday breezes that move easy through moonlit nights.
your eyes invite me... speak to me with only half a glance and no chance to defend myself
i surrender
your voice soothes me... softer then the light between us i believe in miracles and trust everything will be alright
your love comforts me... like warmth on winter nights i tried to fight the feeling but it's too strong
i surrender
you amaze me... like beautiful sunsets and scarlett skies that cry when skies darken with the absesnce of the sun
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59817, WoWzers Posted by empro, Sat Aug-26-06 02:01 AM
>your words move me... >like sunday breezes >that move easy >through moonlit nights. > >your eyes invite me... >speak to me >with only half a glance >and no chance to defend myself > >i surrender > >your voice soothes me... >softer then the light between us >i believe in miracles and trust >everything will be alright > >your love comforts me... >like warmth on winter nights >i tried to fight the feeling >but it's too strong > >i surrender > >you amaze me... >like beautiful sunsets >and scarlett skies that cry >when skies darken with >the absesnce of the sun
I had to repost this entire poem because its flawless to me. I can relate Thanks so much for sharing
Welcome, also
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59831, RE: i surrender.. Posted by ms mimi diva, Sat Aug-26-06 06:01 AM
this is beautiful. keep postin'
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59836, RE: i surrender.. Posted by ASIEM, Sat Aug-26-06 09:52 AM
feel good reading for feel good poets
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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59859, RE: i surrender.. Posted by Exotica, Sun Aug-27-06 03:11 PM
thanks...
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