Go back to previous topic
Forum nameFreestyle Board
Topic subjecti surrender..
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=59813
59813, i surrender..
Posted by Exotica, Sat Aug-26-06 12:39 AM
your words move me...
like sunday breezes
that move easy
through moonlit nights.

your eyes invite me...
speak to me
with only half a glance
and no chance to defend myself

i surrender

your voice soothes me...
softer then the light between us
i believe in miracles and trust
everything will be alright

your love comforts me...
like warmth on winter nights
i tried to fight the feeling
but it's too strong

i surrender

you amaze me...
like beautiful sunsets
and scarlett skies that cry
when skies darken with
the absesnce of the sun
59817, WoWzers
Posted by empro, Sat Aug-26-06 02:01 AM
>your words move me...
>like sunday breezes
>that move easy
>through moonlit nights.
>
>your eyes invite me...
>speak to me
>with only half a glance
>and no chance to defend myself
>
>i surrender
>
>your voice soothes me...
>softer then the light between us
>i believe in miracles and trust
>everything will be alright
>
>your love comforts me...
>like warmth on winter nights
>i tried to fight the feeling
>but it's too strong
>
>i surrender
>
>you amaze me...
>like beautiful sunsets
>and scarlett skies that cry
>when skies darken with
>the absesnce of the sun

I had to repost this entire poem because its flawless to me.
I can relate
Thanks so much for sharing

Welcome, also
59831, RE: i surrender..
Posted by ms mimi diva, Sat Aug-26-06 06:01 AM
this is beautiful. keep postin'
59836, RE: i surrender..
Posted by ASIEM, Sat Aug-26-06 09:52 AM
feel good reading
for feel good poets

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
59859, RE: i surrender..
Posted by Exotica, Sun Aug-27-06 03:11 PM
thanks...