Yo,I was touched on the temple by forces unknown,
got wisdom in the dome,
and im feeling all alone,
rap bound,
im real like this ground,
we proceed to walk on,
talk on,live on,
raise your future kids on,
and do what we do,
nuttin better then passing on the mic like its a case of the flu,
clue,
you knows its me when the beat is ill,
and sense is bein dispersed,
in the illest verse,
i proceed to spit flames,
an animal untamed,
released in this city,
live life how i wish untill somebodys hits me,
then i flip out like a faggot got called a gay,
and start landing fists like im cassius clay,

qsquared told me this in one of my topics and i think it applies to you just like to me,

"..I think you have the right idea, but don't let a word that happens to rhyme rule the piece and take it where it don't need to go"

Of course.

them forces unknown
like the Z chromosome
an alien that rome with chrome
and branded earth his home
with twilight zone in static
ashmatic with a habit
.... oh wait this your post LOL

I enjoyed the read

>Yo,I was touched on the temple by forces unknown,
>got wisdom in the dome,
>and im feeling all alone,
>rap bound,
>im real like this ground,
>we proceed to walk on,
>talk on,live on,
>raise your future kids on,
>and do what we do,
>nuttin better then passing on the mic like its a case of the
>flu,


tell em man. 15 spittin hot stuff like this.....


gotta love it

Thanks Raj n E,its all good.