62205, I Dunno About The Subject Title ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Nov-30-06 12:07 AM
But I like the concept and flow of this -- Yuuuup*
S'specially right here:
>innocence and knowledge >dancing on her forehead >like sizzling beads of sweat?
>who will dance for us now >who will be the coveted dream >that no one has >but we all long for >like the ache to the tooth >before the good fairies come?
I mean -- I see where the fairies title comes from -- But I don't tie it in to the flow until the very end, nahmean?
Don't pay me no mind tho -- I need to take my butt to sleep! -- ;)
|