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Topic subjectRE: Moment of Clarity
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59544, RE: Moment of Clarity
Posted by ASIEM, Sun Aug-20-06 03:00 PM
this flowed so well however i would remove the "but" grammatically it robs your rhythm

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder