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59433, and so the brooke flows
Posted by AidenWaves, Thu Aug-17-06 12:44 AM
she bends like hips do
rounding pastures of green
violet, rose
and lemon hue
and though she's blue
her song's never sad
it's filled with life
like one i've never had
soft and cool
like an old blues song
and still vast and wide
like a lover's arms
deep like blackhole abyss
andromidy
that's how my love flows
so, why am i the only one who sees?
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59489, RE: and so the brooke flows
Posted by ASIEM, Fri Aug-18-06 08:46 AM
liked the colors and image blue was used twice kinda took away the flow for me
but i still likes
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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59538, RE: and so the brooke flows
Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Aug-20-06 10:34 AM
glad u felt it. i don't know know why blue is an issue. but i guess that's how it is right now.
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59622, i love these lines
Posted by mindful, Tue Aug-22-06 06:30 PM
and though she's blue
her song's never sad
it's filled with life
like one i've never had
and although this word sounds nice, "andromidy" i'm unable to acquire a meaning for it. is it misspelled?
good to see you back... *nods*
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61814, RE: i love these lines
Posted by AidenWaves, Tue Nov-14-06 04:56 PM
probably, u know how u get after work... thanks.
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