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Topic subjectAnalyze
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=59426
59426, Analyze
Posted by ak_reborn, Wed Aug-16-06 06:27 PM




Yo,Check the ill-static,
automatic habbit,
i grab the mic like a rabbit,
being choked for its life,
i pour my soul,
into this mic,
i explode like an atom,
or on adam,
getting clocked by the hammer,
i hold up the mic like an idol,
my voice is vital,
critical,its above important,
not to be mentioned,
incase you unaware of who this may be,
anaylyze the profile,
never approach with uncertinty,
i hurt em with the rhymes i create,
my opposition always seem to under estimate,
my mental state,
always diminishes the illest,
so if you the worst,
never be about when i burst,
my verse,needs no critic,
its self critique,
unique,
analyzes itself in a single line,
analyze me or be ready for the real lines...
59485, RE: Analyze
Posted by ASIEM, Fri Aug-18-06 08:21 AM
i'd like to hear this for the flow

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
59498, RE: Analyze
Posted by ak_reborn, Fri Aug-18-06 12:42 PM
Thanks Asiem,keep pennin.
89506, RE: Analyze
Posted by Babynoon, Sat Sep-03-11 10:25 PM
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