The Flame: Skills on the mic. A good flow and voice but tends to sound over-dramatic and thus somewhat unnatural and not wholly convincing. But most of your flow is about the wackness of other mc's, which narrows it's appeal. (Boasting beats bitching.) Nice beat, but too repeditive.

So Good: Nice beat. Emotion more natural on the flow. The way you start your flow at the beginging was ill, dropped in nicely. The singing sample on the hook isn't loud enough to carry the hook after the louder verses.

Vocals come off a bit muffled in both tracks. They're not mixing in the music, they're sitting in a different plane. Better mics/mixing and get it mastered.

I'll check the other two l8er if I can.

Peace,

~Toe