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59201, Peripheral
Posted by crow, Sun Aug-06-06 05:34 PM
Out the corners
Of my wandering eyes
I trace the delicate
Pathways of your lips
I commit to memory
The curves of your brow
Now I find myself
Wondering, contemplating
How strange it is
At the start
Of a waking a day
My mind is already
Focused, locked in
To one thought
And that is
Completing in my memory
The painted fragments
Of my praise to you
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59203, UP
Posted by empro, Sun Aug-06-06 05:43 PM
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59204, up?
Posted by crow, Sun Aug-06-06 06:14 PM
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59210, RE: up?
Posted by empro, Mon Aug-07-06 03:00 AM
I'm giving you props thus the "up"
Nice one man
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