the shadows are long,
virginia summers --
stars melding with humid air,
our dark shapes stretch for days.

i contemplate my elongated form,
reflected on sun baked brick --
i am transformed,
virginia summers,
i am new.

the days go longer,
my shadow grows and stretches,
twists and twines with passing dusken figures --
i have dissolved into you,
virginia summers,
your old dominion.

i walk through your gardens,
my shadows preceeding me --
into your susnet.
into your dusk.

i am one of your world of shadows,
virginia summers,
but not merely a shadow of myself.

stars melding with humid air,
our dark shapes stretch for days.

i contemplate my elongated form,
reflected on sun baked brick --
i am transformed,
virginia summers,
i am new.

up for the imagery alone... Peace~

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l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.

i think i feel my skin going scaled.
can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

really evokes a sense of time and place with great sparseness.
dug.

nicely shaped, I enjoyed the imagery.

Nice piece. Since moving to Seattle this made me miss home.

nice piece, and nicely written keep up the good work


peace wabbit


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i have to hold on just to survive with friendz-tupac

I got a real solid image in this poem and that I'm sure is what you were looking for, so you did an excellent job with it

i walk through your gardens,
my shadows preceeding me --
into your susnet.
into your dusk.


well positioned words...nice work...miss k


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... with her Virginia Summers -- :9



^This^ felt like a warm summer ~breeze~ .... *ReFreshing*



*Miss U*