Most powerful statement of the verse:
>NOT 2a be gangsta, but 2 show ya why we livid...

Not sure if you meant to write livid (as in furious, angry, mad) or if you meant to write lived (as in a glimpse into my life). I like it better as "lived" becuase it can mean that violence is a way of reaching out to educate (though, no knowledge can really come from it) instead of reaching out because of anger. Good job.