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Topic subjecttwin#1 (THE LOVE OF A PLUM'S FLESH)
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58670, twin#1 (THE LOVE OF A PLUM'S FLESH)
Posted by UncleClimax, Sat Jul-22-06 02:33 PM
MY LOVE,
IF THESE POEMS TRULY ASSUMED A FORM CONCRETE
CONSISTED OF FLESH STRAIGHT FROM A PLUM
TO THE PIT SWEET
I'D CALL THE HEAVENS DEVILS
FOR NO WIND CAN KNOW THE LAST WORD OF A SUNSET
AND TREMBLING SAYONARAS HELP BAYONET THE MUDBRICK MOORINGS
OF
MY HEART
CATASTROPHE
FALLS FROM ON HIGH
YET ON AN ISLAND IN SAND YOUR WINGS ARE DRAWN
YOUR HORSE IS CAST HIGH
ABOVE
VAULTED
CLOUDS TO
CARESS THE HOOKS THAT HOLD THE SKY
AND WHEN THE WINTER WISHES TO TOUCH YOUR DEEPEST FLOWER
REMEMBER THE CAT LICKS ITSELF
TO CLEAN THE DIRT OF DAY




twin#2 comin if yall want it
58672, remember the cat licks itself to clean the dirt of day
Posted by mindful, Sat Jul-22-06 04:19 PM
and these lines:

I'D CALL THE HEAVENS DEVILS
FOR NO WIND CAN KNOW THE LAST WORD OF A SUNSET
AND TREMBLING SAYONARAS HELP BAYONET THE MUDBRICK MOORINGS
OF
MY HEART

warrant a twin#2 in my opinion. Peace~

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58686, you got some words with you
Posted by blaksilence, Sun Jul-23-06 11:36 AM

>MY LOVE,
>IF THESE POEMS TRULY ASSUMED A FORM CONCRETE
>CONSISTED OF FLESH STRAIGHT FROM A PLUM
>TO THE PIT SWEET
>I'D CALL THE HEAVENS DEVILS
>FOR NO WIND CAN KNOW THE LAST WORD OF A SUNSET
>AND TREMBLING SAYONARAS HELP BAYONET THE MUDBRICK MOORINGS
>OF
>MY HEART
>CATASTROPHE
>FALLS FROM ON HIGH
>YET ON AN ISLAND IN SAND YOUR WINGS ARE DRAWN
>YOUR HORSE IS CAST HIGH
>ABOVE
>VAULTED
>CLOUDS TO
>CARESS THE HOOKS THAT HOLD THE SKY
>AND WHEN THE WINTER WISHES TO TOUCH YOUR DEEPEST FLOWER
>REMEMBER THE CAT LICKS ITSELF
>TO CLEAN THE DIRT OF DAY
>
>
>
>
>twin#2 comin if yall want it

yea, #2.

58907, twin#2 (CUTS AND CURVES)
Posted by UncleClimax, Fri Jul-28-06 04:54 PM
I SLEEP IN A HOLLOW SERENITY
CUT OFF FROM ALL I WOULD TOUCH
FOR I LAY AND KNOW THE MOUTHS AND CORNERS OF A TEMPTING SOUL
BUT FORGET MY FEET WHEN RUNNING ACROSS THE MOUNTAINS OF MAJESTY
WHO WITHOLD THE BOUNTY
THE RICHNESS THE PURPOSE
OF A HIDDEN ORE
THE DELICATE WARSHIPS PLOT DESTRUCTION
THE FEATHERY ARMAMENTS TOUCH
DOWN ON THE MOST DISTANT CHURCH BELL
A CONSISTENT RING
ING CUT
S AND C
U
R
VES THE AIR
HOLDS THE BREATH STILL



QUICKENS THE BLOOD
AND PAYS THE DEATHTOLL OF
A UNICYCLE BENT
65067, RE: twin#1 (THE LOVE OF A PLUM'S FLESH)
Posted by ASIEM, Sun Mar-11-07 03:06 AM
a poets poetry this one
drop dat

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder