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57090, The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover
Posted by Nathaniel, Tue May-16-06 02:06 PM
He knows not no
unfurled by punches,
and prostrate pushes backwards,
he continues to get comfortable
and take his usual slot, as the doormat
forever in love
rarely ever loved in the same percentile,
he suffers albeit quietly...
At times spazzing, and unleashing this quiet fire,
into a windstorm of urgent rage, pre-empted by a plea for understanding..

harder to come by, now than then
he finds solace in the arms of lesser
the harlot, the spurned, the doubtful...all gravitate to him
prolly for obvious reasons
maybe they smell the years of unrequited like and love,
maybe they hear over the tuff talk and see the kid who was always picked last for dodgeball, mainly cause he ain't wanna have to get dirty, and always got penalized for throwing too hard...go figure..
the end result with this, is virtually the same sh*t as well,
never satisfied with those that overuse re-dial, where my digits are concerned...I am left breaking even the hearts that overwant me..

I'm picky huh?


that dude is me yo,
I get celebrated for surface water (i.e.-looks, vocals, etc..)..but never by the very ones I long to hand my heart over to, lock, stock and barrell...

Yes, it is I my friends, the incredibly consistent, unloved, lover





Nathaniel's music is here : http://angelfire.com/droid/n_thomas

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...
57233, Unloved Lover? -- *Awwwwwww*
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri May-19-06 02:02 AM
Well ...

Hopefully you give love OUTSIDE the computer screen "better" than you do here on OKP -- :P

There's a possibility that you get what you give, nahmean?


And no, I'm not being facetious -- Cuz, since I've been here -- And read your pCe's, I notice your flows are pretty damn nice! -- *No Doubt*

But I see so many off them fall off with little or no responses -- And that ain't fair to you.

Then again, I don't see your commenting or responding to other folks joints very often either -- *shruggs*


Jus' summthin' to think about, yaknow?


Hopefully, this unloved lover pCe is fictional -- And not really about you ...




*Felt The Flow*

57560, RE: Unloved Lover? -- *Awwwwwww*
Posted by Nathaniel, Wed May-31-06 12:09 PM
photo:
you made my week man...I been coming on this site since forever..and have always been given half of a back when it comes to kudos and well wishes. I am a singer and writer by trade, and a full time school aide at a middle school in the bronx...

i wanna be accepted, and I love the roots (and family)...
but i don't lick boots too well...and i am very quick with the wit...some people can't take it.



Nathaniel's music is here : http://angelfire.com/droid/n_thomas

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...
60196, wonder if mos brothas feel like this when...
Posted by ASIEM, Fri Sep-08-06 02:13 PM
love don't love them back?
nice drop

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
57288, these particular lines
Posted by mindful, Sat May-20-06 06:35 PM
tapped me on my shoulder:

and take his usual slot, as the doormat
forever in love
rarely ever loved in the same percentile,
he suffers albeit quietly...
At times spazzing, and unleashing this quiet fire,
into a windstorm of urgent rage, pre-empted by a plea for understanding..

and woke me up... Peace~

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play with mighty fires. ©w.e.b. dubois

no shit in 06.
57583, i hope this
Posted by rgv, Thu Jun-01-06 12:42 PM
I'm picky huh?


that dude is me yo,
I get celebrated for surface water (i.e.-looks, vocals, etc..)..but never by the very ones I long to hand my heart over to, lock, stock and barrell...

Yes, it is I my friends, the incredibly consistent, unloved, lover

isnt part of the pce
but, besides that
it is a job well done
63217, RE: i hope this
Posted by Nathaniel, Fri Jan-19-07 11:07 AM

Nathaniel's music is now here :
www.myspace.com/nisanluv

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...
57597, damn...a bit too close to home...
Posted by blak_yukon, Thu Jun-01-06 05:19 PM

<--get grown,bus!--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

let's talk:
http://yukonmag.com
60180, never did get this one.
Posted by Nathaniel, Fri Sep-08-06 12:22 AM

Nathaniel's music is now here :
www.myspace.com/nisanluv

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...
60340, RE: The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover
Posted by sam_shyne, Fri Sep-15-06 11:41 AM
the guy ur describing is me....it is....lol
60712, RE: The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover
Posted by Nathaniel, Thu Sep-28-06 02:00 PM
no sir...


Nathaniel's music is now here :
www.myspace.com/nisanluv

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...