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57044, disgorged poetics
Posted by ASIEM, Mon May-15-06 06:50 PM
if i had to hip hop my
way to the front page
of letters made in ink wells on stage
i would rather drop little bombs wit
no question where they came from
like the back of stalls
some writers take this as a means to
play things on minds for
those wit time to do
who cares if it takes
from childrens play
these fallout shelters
yall call boards
were mined from the bowels
of somebodies painfull
crash gone south
a rape victim's tears that fell
there has to be another way
to get the point across
to idle heads waitin for comic
relief efforts to raise them
for support...get a fuckin job
and sell yourself again to demon sports
hyperputerizedsextools on ebay
will keep you cummin back for more
as you slip into another fantastic voyage of
narcissistic misogyny cloaked
with titles like i think of you always
wake the fuck up and WRITE FOR REAL!

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
57048, Spit "It" Out, Huh?
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon May-15-06 06:58 PM
I thought I *knew* what disgorged meant -- But then again, I wasn't sure -- So of course I had to look it ^UP^ -- :P

-To bring up and expel from the throat or stomach; vomit.
-To discharge violently; spew.
-To surrender (stolen goods or money, for example) unwillingly.


I'm really gonna miss you!!! -- *sniff* -- Your words always bop me in da head with an awakening of some sort -- Kinda like: Pay Attention -- ~OR~ -- Open your Eyes -- ~OR~ -- Listen!


Check your INBOX later boo!






57068, RE: Spit "It" Out, Huh?
Posted by ASIEM, Mon May-15-06 10:39 PM
i should have known you would go all gold miner and dig up some shizzle

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
57069, There it is
Posted by empro, Tue May-16-06 12:15 AM
>if i had to hip hop my
>way to the front page
>of letters made in ink wells on stage
>i would rather drop little bombs wit
>no question where they came from
>like the back of stalls
>some writers take this as a means to


^ The intro was fresh to def man. I'm feelin it
60786, RE: disgorged poetics
Posted by ASIEM, Sun Oct-01-06 12:23 AM
throw back

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
78607, RE: disgorged poetics
Posted by ASIEM, Sat Feb-21-09 06:41 PM
is this still happening ? ah yeah...unfortunatley but hey growin up aint ez
78653, RE: disgorged poetics
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Wed Feb-25-09 09:16 PM
if i had to hip hop my
way to the front page
of letters made in ink wells on stage
i would rather drop little bombs wit
no question where they came from
like the back of stalls
some writers take this as a means to
play things on minds for

I can always see your pieces in my mind's eye clear as day with no static in between. This one right here appeared to literally come spewing out with a little attitude! I have always respected your pen.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.