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60796, RE: a poet's pen
Posted by STIMULI, Sun Oct-01-06 11:47 AM
>we speak in
>tongues and
>write scripts
>make rhythms as
>sound bites
>of disconnected hearts
>find beats to tap dance
>around pain
>belittled by the onus
>of far reaching dreams
>that make writer's sing
>in double cleft
>space bars
>a cacophonus
>room full of acoustic
>echoes flowing from
>mind bends
>measured by mandelbrot sets
>chaos found it's end inside
>a poets pen
>where harmony resides...

i really like this because it has the capacity to speak both to an independant being or society as a whole.

imo, it is complete...well thought out and clear...still leaving room for the readers own interpretation.