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78884, M*FAKTR, aspiring MC Posted by MFAKTR, Tue Mar-10-09 11:07 PM
Hi, my name is Meilana... i've been writing poems for a long ass time but in the past 4 years I've been working on my flow. I'm really just looking for feedback and inspiration.
Here is a verse that is a current work in progress (some things don't fit yet...) For now its untitled.
Scrappy as I gotta be as I emerge from my chrysalis down with the ignorant bliss that dismissed my growth, stunted my pituitary, I was a closet visionary, gotta carry on while my days remain long. Its not for granted as dreams enchanted rise up to the surface givin my existence purpose. I LIVE to solve the enigma to collapse the stigma that my "y" chromosome honed, etch a place of my own on this plackard of validity, this backwards shit is killin me, now I'm blowin the whistle, chew on the gristle 'cause my words are a pistol, step up and get a fistful, c'mon and humor me, let me spray the walls with the truth thats consuming me, still look down on women unless they underneath, half still surrender between the sheets, tell me how change is complete when its 09 and we're still takin a backseat
http://www.myspace.com/mfaktr (production)
http://www.myspace.com/meilanagillard (jazz)
Much love and faith to all.
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