this was ill
i had to read it twice before i got what you were saying

my fav lines

"they turn against it to
then less is better than none

though it's now feeling good in my soul
letting go
letting go

and awful is my mind to see then the world end
because we don't deserve God's love

people are fools
and i want to hate them all for there ignorant roles

before black went gold
i feel sold
by the devil's happiness
the threats against my purpose arose

here i stood and them below"

vivid imagery saying so much with so little