you really put the feeling of "death" into this piece. at least for me, i could... feel the actions, the swiftness, the finality of it all. especially in the following lines:

And it takes without
Hesitation

I’m not looking
Where it strikes next

But I’m hoping
That it takes me last

*nods*

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