totally understand.
a lot of my pieces are kinda like works in progress. i put down the first thing that comes to mind when i want to convey something and usually leave it as is.
this was what free flowing.
:) the section you took to took me more time the rest because i knew what i wanted to play around with and then had to figure out a 'pretty' way of doing so :)

thanks for the feedback... working on finishing this up...
will post up when done